Your eyeballs are like diamonds;
they probably cost a lot.
And if I tried to steal 'em,
I'd most likely get caught.
But you know, I'd think it's worth it
if for just one day
I could stare into your eyeballs
and daydream the time away.
But well, without eyes you couldn't see
and I'd feel pretty bad
if I knew it was all because
I wanted something I don't have.
So I guess you can keep them eyeballs,
and I'll look but I won't touch.
Because without those big blue eyeballs
I don't think I'd love you as much.
Your Eyeballs Are Like Diamonds by Sarah E. Thomas is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial-No Derivative Works 3.0 United States License.
6 comments:
Haha. Wow. I just...hahhahaah!!!!
My personal favorite is that "eyeballs" rests next to "declarations of love" in the labels.
You're just a touch strange, love. Just a touch.
-samz
PAHAHAHAHAHAHA! That was simply amazing, lovey. Simply amazing. PS-My eyes are like muddy emeralds... Not diamonds. But I'll let it slip. This time. :) -Heatherly
That's truly awesome!
It's a nice poem and a great blog. Did you try this variation? It evens the metre a bit: Your eyeballs are diamonds / as dear as they come / if i tried to steal them / i'd likely get caught... etc.
Check out my own literary attempts at http://metalabis-piscofisico.blogspot.com. Cheers!
do you know? the poetry is a shadow and you show it.
when we are afraid the shadow comes to the light and we make lots of poems like this.
congratulations, it was good.
let me introduce me: i´m a poeth from portugal, i have a book published in portugal.
about my preconcept of texanians i think im wrong, neither all them like cowboys and thats a prove of that
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